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From: respeks_group@yahoogroups.com [mailto:respeks_group@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of lah68 ripen
Sent: Wednesday, March 30, 2011 5:33 PM
To: respeks_group@yahoogroups.com
Subject: Re: RG09... Mari belajar bahasa
Zaman batu bukan zaman air pun bukan..
ZAMAN GOOGLE LER..heheheeee...
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From: nor azlin mohd nordin <azlin8@yahoo.com>
To: respeks_group@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Wednesday, 30 March 2011 16:09:15
Subject: Re: RG09... Mari belajar bahasa
BM En Ripen tu versi zaman batu ke zaman ais? Hehehe
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From: Wala Wala <ezriquet@gmail.com>
To: respeks_group@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Wed, March 30, 2011 3:44:00 PM
Subject: Re: RG09... Mari belajar bahasa
en ripen, jawa version, enggak ada ka?
On Wed, Mar 30, 2011 at 12:59 PM, lah68 ripen <lah68_ripen@yahoo.com.sg> wrote:
My version.....(in red colour)
Nas Isma's original version
Anwar has entered UMNO politics since 1983, I was a lecturer at ITM Terengganu and entered UMNO politics since 1981 at Bandar Kluang Branch. I am much younger than him but more senior in term of membership. He climbed the ladder of success and gained political power smoothly because of support from Dr M but he was sacked in 1998 because of his wrongdoings. Yes he is popular but do not forget, no one is perfect anyway... I believed with all the lies and troubles he brought to himself, to his family, to his fellow friends and to his country... he is not worth it to become our next Prime Minister. What do you think?
para_jump's correction version
"Anwar joined UMNO, a national political party in 1983, during which I was then a lecturer in UiTM Terengganu. Whereas I joined UMNO in 1981 through Bandar Kluang Branch.
"Although I was much younger than him but I was senior in term of membership. His success to rise up the ladder and gained political power smoothly mainly due to the full support and backings from Dr M. However, he was later sacked in 1998 from UMNO due to his wrongdoings. Obviously, he was popular but least not to forget that no one is perfect anyway.. I trust that with all the recorded lies and damages he made himself, his family, his colleagues and to the nation. ... obviously, he does not deserved to become our next Prime Minister. What is your response ?"
Mohd Hilmi version
"Anwar joined UMNO in 1983, during which I was a lecturer in UiTM Terengganu. I joined UMNO in 1981 through Bandar Kluang Branch. Although I was much younger than him, I was senior in term of membership. His rise to the ladder of success and gaining smooth political power was due to the full support from Dr M. However, he was later sacked in 1998 from UMNO due to his wrongdoings. Obviously, he was popular but no one is perfect anyway.. I trust that with all the recorded lies and damages he made to himself, his family, his colleagues and to the nation. ... obviously, he does not deserve to become our next Prime Minister. What is your response ?"
My Version
Anwar telah memasuki politik UMNO sejak tahun 1983, saya pensyarah di ITM Terengganu dan memasuki politik UMNO sejak tahun 1981 di Bandar Kluang Cabang. Saya jauh lebih muda dari dia tetapi lebih senior dalam hal keahlian. Ia menaiki tangga kejayaan dan mendapatkan kuasa politik dengan lancar kerana sokongan dari Dr M tetapi ia dipecat pada 1998 kerana kebejatannya. Ya ia popular tapi jangan lupa, tidak ada yang sempurna toh ... Aku percaya dengan semua kebohongan dan kesulitan ia dibawa ke dirinya sendiri, untuk keluarganya, teman-teman sesama dan negaranya ... ia tidak layak untuk menjadi Perdana Menteri berikutnya. Bagaimana menurut anda?
Diterjemahkan oleh Google Translate...heheheeee...
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From: Mohd Hilmi <hilmi@sspsb.com.my>
To: respeks_group@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Wednesday, 30 March 2011 11:03:01
Subject: Re: RG09... Re: NAS ISMA - WHAT LEVEL IS YOUR ENGLISH VOCABULARY ???
Dear Frens,
I think para-jump's version of English is also not perfect and riddled with many gramatical errors as well. Let me point it out.
1) Anwar joined UMNO, a national political party in 1983, during which I was then a lecturer in UiTM Terengganu.
correction => Anwar joined UMNO in 1983, during which I was a lecturer in UiTM Terengganu. (most Malaysians know UMNO, so don't need to explain ; during which = then, don't repeat)
1) Whereas I joined UMNO in 1981 through Bandar Kluang Branch. = I joined UMNO in 1981 through Bandar Kluang Branch (don't start a sentence with Whereas)
2)Although I was much younger than him but I was senior in term of membership
correction => Although I was much younger than him, I was senior in term of membership (don't combine Although with but)
3) His success to rise up the ladder and gained political power smoothly mainly due to the full support and backings from Dr M
a) His success to rise up the ladder => rise up? rise = to get up, don't repeat; the ladder of what? ; support = backing (dont repeat)
correction => His rise to the ladder of success and gaining smooth political power was mainly due to the full support from Dr M.
4) Obviously, he was popular but least not to forget that no one is perfect anyway
correction => Obviously, he was popular but no one is perfect anyway. (make it simple)
4) I trust that with all the recorded lies and damages he made himself, his family, his colleagues and to the nation. ... obviously, he does not deserved to become our next Prime Minister.
correction => I trust that with all the recorded lies and damages he made to himself, his family, his colleagues and to the nation. ... obviously, he does not deserve to become our next Prime Minister.
5) Have you ever communicate with foreigners both written (letters, fax, e-mail, telegraph; etc) and orally spoken (conference, meeting, telephone conversation, discussion; etc) whereby the medium in English.
correction => Have you ever communicated with foreigners either in writing (letters, fax, e-mail, telegraph; etc) or oral (conference, meeting, telephone conversation, discussion; etc) whereby the medium was English?
Summary
Nas Isma's original version
Anwar has entered UMNO politics since 1983, I was a lecturer at ITM Terengganu and entered UMNO politics since 1981 at Bandar Kluang Branch. I am much younger than him but more senior in term of membership. He climbed the ladder of success and gained political power smoothly because of support from Dr M but he was sacked in 1998 because of his wrongdoings. Yes he is popular but do not forget, no one is perfect anyway... I believed with all the lies and troubles he brought to himself, to his family, to his fellow friends and to his country... he is not worth it to become our next Prime Minister. What do you think?
para_jump's correction version
"Anwar joined UMNO, a national political party in 1983, during which I was then a lecturer in UiTM Terengganu. Whereas I joined UMNO in 1981 through Bandar Kluang Branch.
"Although I was much younger than him but I was senior in term of membership. His success to rise up the ladder and gained political power smoothly mainly due to the full support and backings from Dr M. However, he was later sacked in 1998 from UMNO due to his wrongdoings. Obviously, he was popular but least not to forget that no one is perfect anyway.. I trust that with all the recorded lies and damages he made himself, his family, his colleagues and to the nation. ... obviously, he does not deserved to become our next Prime Minister. What is your response ?"
My version
"Anwar joined UMNO in 1983, during which I was a lecturer in UiTM Terengganu. I joined UMNO in 1981 through Bandar Kluang Branch. Although I was much younger than him, I was senior in term of membership. His rise to the ladder of success and gaining smooth political power was due to the full support from Dr M. However, he was later sacked in 1998 from UMNO due to his wrongdoings. Obviously, he was popular but no one is perfect anyway.. I trust that with all the recorded lies and damages he made to himself, his family, his colleagues and to the nation. ... obviously, he does not deserve to become our next Prime Minister. What is your response ?"
I'm sure lepas ni ada yg akan buat correction/penambah-baikan. I welcome that. I hope my years in Purdue University is not wasted..
Kalau kita nak buat correction, boleh tapi biar la betul supaya org kata jangan jadi macam "ketam nak mengajar anak2nya berjalan betul?". Lagi satu, biar kita ikhlas kalau betul2 nak correct Grammar org, buat la correction. Jgn nak kaitkan dgn penulisan dgn parti org tu pulak...Think positively n selamat beramal...
Regards,
Hilmi
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Sent: Tuesday, March 29, 2011 9:42 PM
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