Great ur statement ..so I salute you Sir@air strike...
On Mon, Mar 28, 2011 at 10:33 PM, lah68 ripen <lah68_ripen@yahoo.com.sg> wrote:
Student yang sepatutnya dapat A di bagi B dan yang sepatutnya dapat C dia bagi A+.. hehehee..aku dah kata.. assingment student yang terbaik dia ubahsuai jadi tesis dia kot..?heheheeee.heee... nampaknya dia kena belajar dari Naza pula...Aku memang hancur kalau BI ni.. tapi sekurang-kurangnya aku masih faham dan boleh baca BI, cuma tak tahu kalau ada kesilapan... kiranya para_jump ni memang boleh tahan BI dia...Aku guna BM jer ler....
From: para_jump101 airborne <air_strike101@yahoo.com>
To: KENALAN-ABADI@yahoogroups.com
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Sent: Sunday, 27 March 2011 22:09:39
Subject: NAS ISMA - WHAT LEVEL IS YOUR ENGLISH VOCABULARY ???
Nas Isma,
What a horribly terrible, terribly horrible English is this. Being a former lecturer in the higher learning institution, it was most disgusting to learn that the sentences in this article was written by a such highly educated person. By reading your article, I wonder, how UMNO engaged you as their Information Officer. No doubt, how UMNO is in shambles. In aviation industry, this is called "Foreign Object Damaged (FOD) which may be extremely detrimental to the safety of equipment, aircrews and passengers.
Have you ever communicate with foreigners both written (letters, fax, e-mail, telegraph; etc) and orally spoken (conference, meeting, telephone conversation, discussion; etc) whereby the medium in English.
Anyway, please allow me to reconstruct and rephrase the sentences to be in a more appropriate English as below:
"Anwar joined UMNO, a national political party in 1983, during which I was then a lecturer in UiTM Terengganu. Whereas I joined UMNO in 1981 through Bandar Kluang Branch.
"Although I was much younger than him but I was senior in term of membership. His success to rise up the ladder and gained political power smoothly mainly due to the full support and backings from Dr M. However, he was later sacked in 1998 from UMNO due to his wrongdoings. Obviously, he was popular but least not to forget that no one is perfect anyway.. I trust that with all the recorded lies and damages he made himself, his family, his colleagues and to the nation. ... obviously, he does not deserved to become our next Prime Minister. What is your response ?"
Notes:
Would you think that the above reconstruction, rephrases of the sentences and the selection of words, were more appropriate and can be easily understood.
In English, you have to select the right words and phrases in order to construct your sentences. The word "Enter" cannot be used as a verb to describe a non-physical object; ie. UMNO is an organization and not a physical object. Enter may be used to a physical object which can seen or felt such as buildings for an example. In this case, the word 'joined" would be more appropriate to be substituted in the above sentence.
Similarly, the next following sentence should be rephrased so as to "bridge" the former sentence which is in continuation of the description to be highlighted.
Anyway, for future articles, please be more careful in your selection of vocabulary when constructing sentences, use of appropriate phrases, grammar and nouns. The articles produced will reflect the author's or person's level, capability and the knowledge of vocabulary.
para_jump101
--- On Tue, 3/22/11, Nas Isma <angahku_01@yahoo.com> wrote:
From: Nas Isma <angahku_01@yahoo.com>
Subject: Re: DAH TERKANTOI, DIA TABUR FITNAH PULAK???
To: "xstream" <pejal71@gmail.com>, "Hasno bin Hashim Hashim" <hasno.hashim@yahoo.com>
Cc: "MalaysiaNews" <MalaysiaNews@yahoogroups.com>, PerisikRakyat@yahoogroups.com, KENALAN-ABADI@yahoogroups.com, that421@yahoo.com, "Roslan Salleh" <roslan.salleh@yahoo.com.my>, wafi_74@yahoo.com.my, wwannora@yahoo.com, zwh80_aries@yahoo.com, "Aziz" <aziz@precico.com.my>, "MURAD" <murad@precico.com.my>, mdrozali.mohdnor@samsung.com, "tokda tokda" <tokda_tokda@yahoo.com>, "taufik ahmad" <taufik26878@yahoo.com>, lah68_ripen@yahoo.com.sg, "Nik Mahdhir Ariffin Nik" <nikmahdhir_82@yahoo.com.my>, "Fiqa Huda" <fiqahuda@yahoo.com.my>, farhansobri@yahoo.com, nazacomp@gmail.com, "Najib Malik" <sham_najib@yahoo.com>, "UMNO - Zulkepli Abu Samah" <zas62000@yahoo.com.sg>, "para_jump101 airborne" <air_strike101@yahoo.com>, "yusri khatib" <yusri762002@yahoo.com>, faridahib@yahoo.com
Date: Tuesday, March 22, 2011, 5:11 PM
Anwar has entered UMNO politics since 1983, I was a lecturer at ITM Terengganu and entered UMNO politics since 1981 at Bandar Kluang Branch. I am much younger than him but more senior in term of membership. He climbed the ladder of success and gained political power smoothly because of support from Dr M but he was sacked in 1998 because of his wrongdoings. Yes he is popular but do not forget, no one is perfect anyway... I believed with all the lies and troubles he brought to himself, to his family, to his fellow friends and to his country... he is not worth it to become our next Prime Minister. What do you think?
--
Warmets regards
dsjkamarul
….Nothing in life is to be feared..it is only to be understood….
Don't be afraid to give up the good to go for the great!!!!
Don't be afraid to give up the good to go for the great!!!!
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November 26th 2010
dsjkamarul
November 26th 2010
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